Воть ещё одно творение моего пера.
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Воть ещё одно творение моего пера. Вновь на иностранном. Название рабочее, текст рабочий, ритмика корявая, рифма тоже, но шо поделать??? Можете лучше?
Welcome in my blog to discuss it, to have some conversation & perhaps it become not a pity rhyme, but something really interesting.
Кто не понял, что я написал – не поймёте и текста. Поэтому хуетой не срите, есть чо по делу (см. выше).
Зы. На всякий случай: восхититься и похвалить труд Мастера можно здесь же…
Heavy metal opus
Pre-verse:
Raise your heads and stand up from your knees
The power of the (heavy) metal not only in the strings
Verse:
The times were long forgotten
Will soon comes back on Earth
It will be end of torture
And we will fighting forth
We’ll be again together
Let’s join us to be free (survive)
We never will surrender
Only metal made us free
Bridge:
We are united to carry on
Our power is in our hands
The time of heavy metal again has come
Show the magic of your strings!
Chorus:
Heavy metal is return
Heavy metal is comeback
Our enemies will burn
In the flames of metal gods!
Verse:
Standing on a razor blade
You’re not alone my friend
Fighting for metal again & again
Let’s break the rules at the end!
Only we know the power of music
Running like blood through the veins
Only we know the price of the Heaven
Cause someday we’ll burn in Hell
Chorus:
Heavy metal is return
Heavy metal is comeback
Our enemies will burn
In the flames of metal gods!
Well, I’m continuing to issue some of my rhymes in this blog. It’s a pity, that not many people can speak or just understand English. Perhaps, someday the World will understand my rhymes, or it isn’t worth it. Of course, I’m not a native speaker & also can make some mistakes (mostly in Grammar
), but… at least, I’m try… So enjoy!
The New Eden
Verse:
Another world was lost forever,
Another day shall never come.
Lost souls are crying all together:
What everybody had been done?
Victims of a yesterday forever free
Lie & pain for them is no more,
Do you ever think – it all might be,
Should we start another score?
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale
Verse:
A lot of holy wars forgotten
For what we fought, we’ll never know
The last one sword is broken
To struggle here we needn’t now
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale
Verse:
Could we ever reach for our goal,
Or it will be other life with pain?
Should we find the Eden for us all
Well, perhaps another day…
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale
Welcome in my blog to discuss it, to have some conversation & perhaps it become not a pity rhyme, but something really interesting.
Кто не понял, что я написал – не поймёте и текста. Поэтому хуетой не срите, есть чо по делу (см. выше).
Зы. На всякий случай: восхититься и похвалить труд Мастера можно здесь же…
Heavy metal opus
Pre-verse:
Raise your heads and stand up from your knees
The power of the (heavy) metal not only in the strings
Verse:
The times were long forgotten
Will soon comes back on Earth
It will be end of torture
And we will fighting forth
We’ll be again together
Let’s join us to be free (survive)
We never will surrender
Only metal made us free
Bridge:
We are united to carry on
Our power is in our hands
The time of heavy metal again has come
Show the magic of your strings!
Chorus:
Heavy metal is return
Heavy metal is comeback
Our enemies will burn
In the flames of metal gods!
Verse:
Standing on a razor blade
You’re not alone my friend
Fighting for metal again & again
Let’s break the rules at the end!
Only we know the power of music
Running like blood through the veins
Only we know the price of the Heaven
Cause someday we’ll burn in Hell
Chorus:
Heavy metal is return
Heavy metal is comeback
Our enemies will burn
In the flames of metal gods!
Well, I’m continuing to issue some of my rhymes in this blog. It’s a pity, that not many people can speak or just understand English. Perhaps, someday the World will understand my rhymes, or it isn’t worth it. Of course, I’m not a native speaker & also can make some mistakes (mostly in Grammar
), but… at least, I’m try… So enjoy!The New Eden
Verse:
Another world was lost forever,
Another day shall never come.
Lost souls are crying all together:
What everybody had been done?
Victims of a yesterday forever free
Lie & pain for them is no more,
Do you ever think – it all might be,
Should we start another score?
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale
Verse:
A lot of holy wars forgotten
For what we fought, we’ll never know
The last one sword is broken
To struggle here we needn’t now
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale
Verse:
Could we ever reach for our goal,
Or it will be other life with pain?
Should we find the Eden for us all
Well, perhaps another day…
Chorus:
The new Eden is our hope for tomorrow
The promised land for us all
The future day without sorrow
The life become a fairytale